the comet part 2/2

The comet

Part 2

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The start of a new beginning

Chapter 9

oh god there was a huge ship and it landed then nothing happened. holy jesus my god ryan said freaking out. What are we going to do sam said worried. I i don’t know i don’t know i said. Then something happened i saw a foot then another but the second foot looked weird like the aliens we fought then i saw an eye glowing. The bus still wasn’t here were we stuck in time the bus should have been here already. Then something came out my dad. Dad dad dad!!! I said. ROAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. What the i said. He was molded and his face was on his chest and had an eye in his mouth he was deformed and had multiple limbs and his left arm was massive and he was just standing there in the road. Guys i’m going to go and see if he’s awake i said. No sam whispered. Don’t do it man ryan said. Dad awoke and grabbed me and flung me across the road. Ah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I said. Jonathan no!!! ryan said . dude look out sam said. Then when i thought all hope was lost my sword came and went behind me and turned into a shield and broke my fall. Holy crap. Now dad it’s your turn as i came out of the rubble. HEY DUDE NOT COOL ryan said aggravated. Yo you looking for a beating sam said. ROAR ROAR!!!! Dad said. Okay dad now get pummeled i was faster i ran to dad and i used my shield and hit him in his molded and rotting teeth. Nice one jonathan. Yea. okay my turn sam said. As soon as sam threw his boomerang it started to track dad like it was programmed and like it had a mind of it’s own like it was a heat seeking missile. Heck yeah suck on that you piece of garbage sam said. Then ryan pulled out his scythe and he spun it the the scythe was loose from his hand and started to spin in the air and spun in the air and ryan got on it and he started to fly and then the scythe darted to dad and sliced his neck off. Holy crap ryan said as he got of the scythe. When ryan sliced his neck blood came out like a waterfall and it was real blood not the green disgusting blood like the aliens Then…

Chapter 10

dream

Then the half molded body dissolved then dad was in there his body was used as a puppet for that thing we fought. He was sleeping i was going to touch him to see if he was awake before i could touch him he woke up. Hello jonathan dad said. Hi i said. He got up  but not the way a normal human would he got up like a robot stiffend he stood he turned his head in a weird way then the bus came. Hey dad we have to go i said feeling bad but not really i wanted to get away from that thing that was not my dad. Sorry son but your not going to school today dad said. But i have to go-no you don’t get home son. Okay? I said.um mr. maxis  yes sam dad said. Um can we come to your house sam said. No you may not dad said. Okay bye jonathan. Bye you guys. Jonathan get in the house now dad said. Jonathan who’s there mom said. Dad i said. *screaming* Mom screaming.*heavy footsteps* mom are you okay i said get OUT RIGHT NOW-i interrupted. I’m hungry. Mom took a swing at the dad she hit dad and didn’t even phase him. What the glob mom said.  Showing signs of aggression dad said. I took a knife and stabbed him in his the back sparks shot out in multiple directions. Jonathan go get the shovel now. We buried robot dad. I went to sleep dreaming. *jonathan’s dream* I stood there standing at the bus stop, soon Sam strold up at the bus stop, we conversed about last night show “Dude What Would Happen” that comes on Cartoon Network, while we were talking Ryan came out of nowhere and joined into the conversation, as we were talking I start to realize that there voices and face started to drown out and disappear, and everything around us became bleak and void, my heart started to race as I didn’t know what to do, I tried to reach out for my friends but they became dust between my fingers, I stared in disbelief as I processed what had just happened, when I looked up everything was gone and I stood in a black void, I could hear my heartbeat in my ears now and my breathing became faster and shallower, my head started to spin and without thinking I started to run. I was just running without any clear knowledge of where I was going, all I knew is that I wanted to get out of this place, as I continued running a figure started to appear, I started to scream at it, in any hope for it to respond back to me so it could help me get out of this place, as I ran closer I the figure started to take more of a shape, it felt like I’ve been running for so long, i could hear the echo of my footsteps everytime they hit the ground. I started to lose my breath, I stopped running and stood hunched over trying to catch my breath, after the burning sensations in my lungs fade and the constricting feeling in my throat went away, I stood up and blinked repeatedly trying to adjust my eyesight, I realized the figure was closer to me now, I could see that it was a man and what they were wearing, he had on dress shirt like one my dad had, navy blue pants, and white New Balance shoes just like the ones my dad wore. This figure was bringing back a lot of nostalgia about when my dad was around, I felt so compelled to call out his name, I just kept staring at the back of this figure while all these memories flooded my mind. I couldn’t stop myself, it was to late, his name slipped out, and the figures head started to turn around and twitch rapidly. Then he turned around and he had no face and then a smile started to form and then he started to mutate his left arm was muscle and bone and meat and his arm started to grow then his right eye started to roll up in his eye socket and then it started to inside his skin roll into his mouth and his left eye was bloodshot red and i could swear i saw puss coming out the left eye,and his right arm was sagging limpless num and his torso started to move and i saw hand come out hs flesh and then multiple came out and his feet were claws and look like they were burned to the crisp. He swung at me but he miss and i fell down because of fear i got up and started running i was running like hell i was scared out of my mind. Help please some help i said plead. Fleet fleet they come dad said and that’s all he could say the rest were roars i fell off the void and into the deep and dark cold and evil abyss. I woke up saying. Holy god oh i’m safe.

Prophecy

Chapter 11

Mom i’m going to go and hang out with sam and ryan okay. Sure honey mom said. Hey ryan come on. K ryan said. Sam let go. Fine sam said. *The site of the comet* guys do you think that there’s something in that comet i said. You know maybe ryan said. Okay let’s see what’s in there sam said. The comet started to ooze something we backed off trying not to get that ooze get on us then it stopped oozing that weird liquid. We looked in the comet there’s was nothing there but i notice that there was a scroll. Somehow it wasn’t touched by the ooze i picked it up. Hey guys look what i found i said. What’s that sam said. It’s a scroll ryan said. Okay what does it say sam said. it says buried foes brung from the ground to the surface. thy blinding light will form. True battle begins. The chosen one’s thy fuze. The battle of the of the blinding and thy chosen one begins. What ryan said. I’m going to keep it just in case i said. Okay well i’m going home sam said. Me to ryan said. As ryan and sam were walking down the mountain i looked at the scroll and said. what could this mean why us how could no one hear me and my friend’s battle dad. why i said. I had so many questions yet none of them were answered.

girl

Chapter 12

Hey jonathan the school called me they said that it’s bring your dog day pretty fun right mom said. Yeah i said. *beep beep* oh my you know what i’m done i’m done i said angrily.  Picked up my chair and threw it at the alarm and it hit it then i got dressed. Woof woof oh hey hurricane lets go to school bye mom i got on the bus ryan and sam were there had bring their dogs sam had golden retriever ryan had bloodhound mine was a doberman mix with a bloodhound i saw someone who had a corgi then there was a girl she didn’t have a dog she stood out from the rest i walked up to her she had a golden bow in her hair and had beautiful black hair she had a school uniform on and leather shoes and black  leggings and she looked at me and said. well hello and who are you she said. Im jonathan i said fumbling for words. Oh that’s a cute name she said. Thanks i said my mouth was watery. She said. My name is Nova she said. My dog started to walk up he got in a attack position immediately he was barking i told him to stop and told him to go to sam and ryan he walked off. Sorry about that as i rubbed the back of my head. It’s okay then before she walked off she put her hand on my cheek and walked off. I was in love. Hey the bus is moving everyone in your seats now*** as me and my dog and my friends got off the bus i saw nova go behind the school and i heard a splatter hmm? i said. Then i heard buzzing and then the sound of something being cut down. I was suspicious.  I rubbed my eyes to see if my eyes were playing tricks on me. Hey jonathan ryan said. Huh oh what is it. Hurry up we’re gonna be late because of you***okay class we’re gonna be working on division okay. The teacher said.*loud speaker* hello hello jonathan report to the assistant principal. *class laughing* hey whoever is laughing you better stop alright i said. Then i left the classroom hello jonathan have you seen this boy uhh no not at all i said. Oh well you can go back to school.*writing time* *loud speaker* may everyone come to the gym. Okay everyone line up. *gym*when i walked in the gym there were officer’s everyware. Hey guys this must be serious i said to ryan and sam. As we sat down i saw a coffin i was sitting next to sam and ryan. One of the teachers started to talk and she said that we are here to mourn over a boy who was very nice and kind hearted and who standed up for what was right she said. Then a soon as the coffin opened i felt depression sadness grief and fear but it felt different and i felt if someone behind me was trying to touch me and who was behind me was nova out the corner of my eye i saw for a split second is saw a face with no morals and no emotion just insanity someone who wanted to just have me and with no teeth no tongue just a cold and empty void then as i was fully turned around it was just regular nova then one of the male teacher’s said for people to walk up and pay their respects i was called on first and as i walked up i looked at the kid who was in the coffin and his hands were pale white and he was in a clean and jet black suit with a red tie he was at peace he slept a tear rolled down my cheek i paid my respects and went and sat down but before i sat down nova chuckled with laughter. I was disgusted. After school i went for a walk. My dog was he was protecting me.

Cannibal

Chapter 13

I’m such an idiot i said. *walking through tunnel* huh who’s that oh god i said in disgust. What the-jonathan oh i’m sorry you had to see that nova said. Hey just for being a cannibal i’m gonna call you knock off pennywise wanna know why cause he eats people i said. Grrr you gonna pay nova said. Her face started to melt. She started to run at me at full speed. I was running like crazy i didn’t want to get caught. Oh god oh god oh god i said. I turned around she was right in my face she teleported i turned around she knocked me down she opened her mouth revealing rows of teeth she started to come close and i felt her hot breath on my face. She came closer i thought i was gonna pass away just then… the old creepy man he saved me they started fighting he bit her with his bunch of sharp teeth. I started to get up i called my sword. By saying come here out loud. It came i held it i jumped up and slit her right across the torso blood came everware. Suck on that knock off pennywise ha i said. The old man started to walk away. Hay thanks i said. He turned and said meet me here bring your friends as well he said he gave me a card that said where to meet him. Why i said. Don’t ask just do it he said. Hey umm can i get your name i said. It’s charles okay. Yea okay bye as i waved. I looked at the blood splatter it was gone. I walked home.

Training

Chapter 14

Jonathan don’t go to school there’s gonna be a 2 foot snow storm mom said. Okay *ring ring* what the… how did charles get my number i said. are you coming charles said. There’s gonna be a 2 foot snow storm i said. Just come tell your mom charles said. Mom can i go outside i said. Yea just make it before the storm mom said. *Outside* sam sam!!!! Is that you i said. Jonathan!!! Sam said. Sam was running to me he caught up. Sam follow me i said. Okay but why sam questioned. nova attacked me what the new girl why is everyone dying why are some people monsters. I shrugged i also felt the same. So where are we going to go get ryan alright i said. Ryan you there ryaan RYAN *door opening* WHAT what do you want ryan said. Follow me i said. Fine ryan said. Mom i’m going out with my friend’s ryan said. Okay bye ryan’s mom said. Okay where are we going ryan said you’ll see i said. WHAT we’re going in the ship no i‘m leaving *footsteps* you are late come-hey your that creepy hobo-the name is charles actually-i don’t care what your name is just shut up ryan pulled out his weapon and tried to hit charles with his scythe charles stopped it with his finger and ducked and went sideways to the right ryan was stuck in mid air or charles was moving that fast then charles turned his head and hit his elbow on ryan’s head and ryan flipped when he hit the ground and then charles punched him in the spaceship bang!!! Holy-dude let see if ryan is okay hurry. Ryan was still conscious charles was standing next to ryan. Ryan got up and stepped back towards us. Sorry ryan said apologizing. It’s okay charles said. Okay now that’s over are you ready for your training charles said with his hands behind his back. Okay now first all of you will try to hit me charles said. We drew are weapons ready but he said no weapons. We complained but we followed his orders. We all got in a battle stance. Charles showed us the come over here sign and said show me what you got he said. I tried to ground pound him but he dogged it dang it i missed i said. Sam was behind him he did a roundhouse kick but charles leaned back and then sam thrust his other leg to hit him in the back but charles jumped in the air. Hi charles ryan said. And this i what you get for hitting me ryan swung his scythe downwards but missed then went behind charles and swung his scythe and grapled the old dude and kicked him charles hit the wall of the spaceship there was rubble was everyware then out of the smoke i saw red burning fierce eyes then when the smoke cleared charles jaw hanged and sharp teeth started to show and charles grew a tail he roared. He was faster than ever i couldn’t even see charles he was to fast he punched me in my stomach i felt like my insides were exploding. Sam got slashed on his arm it started to gush out blood ryan was bitten on the neck we were all in pain we huddled together we started to calm down i started to feel weird i opened my my eyes the outline of my vision was red i could see charles. Ryans eyes were ember he moved soon from where he was he was right next to me. Sam eyes were silver when charles tried to hit sam. Sam dodge it with ease we made a plan. Sam was gonna get attacked by charles. Sam dodge it then sideways kicked charles he got hit into ryan. ryan uppercut charles in the air and jumped up and rapidly punched him in mid air then punched him into the ground where he met me i punched him into one of the walls in the spaceship he kept coming we did are final attack i took ahold of sam’s arm and threw him at charles sam threw his hardest punch at charles then charles tried to hit sam but sam dodged left and threw charles upward and ryan ran at sam. Sam caught ryan and threw him where charles was at and ryan punched charles out the roof and when charles came back ryan punched him to me. I put all my energy into one punch and punched charles threw five wall’s of the spaceship. Ryan and sam came back to me are eye color slowly faded away we were tired charles came back in his regular form. Charles was proud. Hey what should we call that attack you guys eyes of karma i… i like it you guys i said. Well there’s gonna be a storm i said. bye charles we all said. Hey meet me tomorrow okay. Okay we all said.

Monster taming

Chapter 15

“Wow it’s really snowing out there” I said.  “yeah I’m going to make dinner mom said.” *Ring ring* “bring your dog tomorrow and your friends dogs too.” charles said. “Why?” i said. “Just do it”. *few minutes later* jonathan “come eat mom” said. Okay. *another few minutes* “well i’m done” i said. “Good night mom” i said. Good night mom said. *next day*…”mom i’m gonna take the dog for a walk okay” i said. “Okay but get home after dark thieves come after dark” mom said. “Okay” i said. *Walking through street* *knocking on the door* “sam lets go” i said. Okay sam said. Oh by the way bring your dog i said. Ryan’s in the house sam said. Oh nice is his dog here as well i asked. Yea sam said. Hey ryan let’s go and bring your dog sam yelled in his house alright ryan said. So where are we going? sam said. To charles i said okay*spaceship[aka charles place]* hey charles ryan said. So jonathan did you tell them to bring their dogs charles said. Yeah i said. Good charles said. By the way you left your weapons charles said. We tried to pick up are weapons but we couldn’t. Don’t pick the your weapons yet give me them charles said. Okay? Sam said. We gave are weapons to charles. Thank you now give me your dogs he said. We gave him are dogs thank you charles said. He put are weapons in are dogs mouths are dog started to mutate what did you do  i yelled at charles. Try to tame the if you can charles said. Sam’s mutated dog hit him across the spaceship. Ryan he tried to hit sam’s mutated ryan tried to hit it but he got hit by his own mutated dog i was terrified mine hit me in the ground we were unconscious we lost hey gu-guys you win some you lose some before i fell unconscious i saw charles turn are dogs back to there regular form. Hey guys you slept for a awhile you okay charles said. Hurricane was right next to me he was sleeping. You turned are dogs into monsters i said. I’m truly sorry but if you need backup you have your dog’s charles ryan and sam were awake listening so if i do need backup then how do i do that to my dog i said. Just put our weapon in there mouths charles said. Okay hey is it dark yet i said. Almost charles said. We need to go i said. *almost night time*don’t move someone said. What the i said. turnaround o…okay i said in fear. Hurricane take this i whispered hurricane grew in his monster form. Hurricane gulped down the thief. Hurricane picked me up and he put me on his back and we rode home in the night.

Army

Chapter 16

*Alien spaceship* .uhruhf3uh3ufebgigu the alien said holding its captor LET ME GO the unknown voice said ‘,;l;,’/@#$%  said the alien the alien came closer to me and said in english KILL YOU roar. Whoa i woke out of my sleep. jeez are you okay jonathan mom said. Umm yea just a bad dream im fine it’s nothing i said. Well do want to go bowling you can bring your friends mom said. Nah i’m good but i’ll go bowling with you i said. So you don’t want to bring your friends mom said. Yeah i said. Well get dressed mom said. As I got dressed ryan called me. Dude so when we left charles and i got home i was eating steak right and i was using a knife to cut my steak and i dropped it it almost hit my leg and then my dog turned into a monster and caught it its was like an inch away from hitting me ryan said. Wow cool i said. I know right-i hanged up on him. Jonathan are you ready mom said. Yeah two seconds alright let’s go i said. *alien spaceship* sir are forces that we have sent have been terminated. WHAT where were the troops king Nibiru said. On this planet called e ar th ? one of the crew members said. It’s called earth king nibiru said. Um sir the weapons have been taken by some human earthlings a second crew member said. WHAT oh my why why me king Nibiru said. Sir they were taken buy a couple of kids another crew member said. You know what we’re going over there and we are taking over and where is nova king Nibiru said. My king nova said bowing. Did you get it king Nibiru said. No nova said. *Back on planet earth*. Ma your up okay here we go mom rolled a bowling ball she got a strike. *loudspeaker* may everyone please evacuate the area the loudspeaker said. Jonathan let’s go mom said people were leaving they were scared. *Outside of the bowling place* The ground started shake i saw a huge crack that started to form in the road. A huge comet was coming in are atmosphere i couldn’t move i was paralyzed from fear i saw a beam shot down to me and only me i remembered my sword was in my pocket i tried calling my sword i couldn’t talk. Nuts i said in my head. I was knocked out everything went dark. *alien spaceship* i was in a tank or a capsule of some sort. Hey what the where am i said. Hello king Nibiru said. Hey let me out i said. And what makes you think i would let you go king Nibiru said. Okay let’s see how bout i roast you with your mcgriddle hairline your ugly space shoes and don’t get me started on your and  clothes alright oh and lookie here you forgot to take my sword i said. Oh no… king Nibiru said. Hiya!!! I broke the glass i made a run for it on my way i saw nova through one of the windows on my way. Pods spaceships anything please ah! Here we go uhh i can’t read this i said. My sword started move it came out of my pocket it broke the alien keypad the hatch opened i got in it was sent to earth. *earth* i got out of the space shuttle and everything was in complete chaos everything was on fire people were screaming. Hey!! Who are you come out and show yourself someone said. Hey calm down it’s me jonathan i said. Show your sword then the sam said said. Here it is see told you i said. Oh sorry this town has been torn to shreds as you can see sam said. So have you been slayen aliens i said. Yeah so has ryan sam said. So where is he i said. He busy right now sam said. Come on let’s go we got a war to fight sam said. Me and sam were running and we were slaying aliens on the way. WHAT THE sam said. It’s them again i said. It was the aliens that we first fight it was the one with big arms and the other one wings but there was another one it had four arms and it had eyes on its body it had a snake tail for a body*epic battle scene* welp that was easy i said. Yea lets go sam said. Ryan is that you sam said. Yea ryan said. Did bring our dogs sam said. Yea you guys ready ryan said. Our dogs transformed and we went to look for the alien leader we found him his army was huge they were ready to slaughter us we notice nova was standing there ready to kill charles jumped in we were ready to fight. *another epic battle scene* only me ryan and sam were left charles was unconscious you weaklings will die king Nibius said. King Nibius turn into a bright light we fuzed we don’t know how we did it a true battle began. *true battle begins* *true battle ends* did you alien overlord we all said together said. Our ultimate weapon that looked like a katana we stabbed him right in the back and we won all the effects that the aliens caused were slowly vanishing. Charles woke up he bid us farewell and left in his spaceship slashed comet and we continued with are lives and this is where i bid my goodbye. Goodbye. END.